- Identify the person (first name, last initial) or the group (name one person in the group), then tell what you thought of their (1) ideas and (2) the way the ideas were presented.
- If you see or hear something good, please be specific about what you liked.
- If you see room for improvement, please make your suggestions constructive (don't just rip on people).
- As always, make your comments appropriate for class and your worldwide audience.
Wednesday, September 16, 2009
News of the Future Feedback
After you watch the News of the Future presentation in class (September 16 and 18), please post some comments about what you saw.
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Taylor T. and Danny C. Your news was funny but I didn't understand the mask or why it was dark. I laughed a lot but you should remember your lines better, thanks. Overall, great effort.
ReplyDeleteTaylor was very touched on his heart with that news with the piggish banks. very interesting characters
ReplyDeleteTaylor and daniel your presentation was good and funny. I liked your acid rain idea. The only thing bad about it was it was kinnda hard to understand the guy in the mask.
ReplyDeletegroup - Taylor T, Danny C,
ReplyDeleteI thought daniel and Taylor did really well with getting the idea of the future across, and they added a nice pinch of comedy into the video, all together i give it two thumbs up.
I think Matt, Nick, Jesse, and Keenan did an excellent job. Their stories were interesting and also believable. I think they did a great job
ReplyDeletematt nick jesse keenan
ReplyDeletegood origanality
i thought that Daniels and Taylor video was hilarious and they should get a really good grade on it for goin through the effort to make a video. i really liked the mask that Taylor was wearing it reminded me of the futurama news guy
ReplyDeleteTaylor, Danny....... I thought that was well thoght out and well planned. It was funny and done well.
ReplyDeletei think its odd that nick is so far away from the others
ReplyDeleteGood job danny and taylor it was very good. i enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteOk I'm sorry Keenan, Jesse, Nick, and Matt but the news was boring. I knoow you guys did some research because it sounds like you guys did but it wasn't that interesting. That is all.
ReplyDeleteKeenan, jesse, matt, and nick had a good one. There news probably could be real in the future. Good job guys.
ReplyDeleteI think that Spemcer's and KJs project was fantastic. I laughed and teareded up. Overall I thought they did an A+ job.
ReplyDeleteKeenan, Jesse, Matt, and Nick, I thought your presentation was good overall. I think however when nick started laughing randomly, it weighed down your entire preformance.
ReplyDeleteTaylor and Danny.
ReplyDeleteGood job, whatever effect you used made the video really interesting. It was a good balance of funny and smart that really kept me captivated the whole time.
Spencer, Kj, Phill, Jordan, I thoroughly enjoyed your entire performance, it was very well done.
ReplyDeleteI completely agree with you Max. Good call.
ReplyDeleteGood job Sam. I liked that you winged the whole thing and made up the stories on the spot. Very funny too.
ReplyDeletei enjoyed the music a bunch, sam is a great anchor.
ReplyDeletethe war on mars sounds like the crazyist war ever with all the blue monsters.
ReplyDeleteSam...... Way to go sam, brave to do this all your self, funny and well thought out. nice job!
ReplyDeleteSam. Your news stories were great ideas, they were just not very believable. However, it was still quite humorous and it was a great job memorizing the whole script. Try to have props next time, thanks.
ReplyDeleteya who does care about greenland. go blue monsters Sam R
ReplyDeleteSam your presentation was hilarious.The only thing was it wasn't very accurate. The music was great.
ReplyDeleteSam, that may have been one of the best performances I have ever seen. It was amazing that you memorized that entire script. Overall it was great.
ReplyDeletetaylor and daniel, well i like how they made up different names for things and how their one anchor was an alian from space and was doing the news and it was very entertaining
ReplyDeleteNick,matt,jesse,keenan, it was cool how they used new words for a type a war and how they added things from our present to the new present.they had alot of futuristic ideas that was cool. it was the best news report that i have ever seen
spencer,kj,phil,jake, Put A Shirt On! but other than that it was ok
sam that one about the green and blue monsters was funny
sam
ReplyDeletereally funny
im glad scully involved harry potter. its unlikely but pretty great anyways
ReplyDeletegood job scully. very funny. your a one man team. I liked all the stories.
ReplyDeleteJesus, Gage, Miles, and Tyler, I did not enjoy your performance, I thought it was an odd choice for a project.
ReplyDeleteJesus, Miles, Gage, and Tyler did a very good job. I envy them because it was awesome. Good job fellas. Kinda wierd story about Brad though.
ReplyDeleteSam and Scully your prestations were very funny! Good Job!
ReplyDeleteJesus, Tyler, Miles and Gage. Your news paper was done very well. I didn't understand the accent though, where are you from? I am not a fully convinced that I want the new Toyota, it doesn't sound that cool. I thoroughly enjoyed Jesus' girl fight, it was silly.
ReplyDeleteMiles, Gage, Tyler good job. Your stories were really interesting.Also, your voices made it very enjoyable. Jesus, i thought it was funny. Sorry i laughed. Probably isn't the best thing to announce your bored though, or interrupt your group.
ReplyDeletehome sweet dome the weather controling polution free home the future Gage
ReplyDeleteTyler gage jesus and miles good job. Jesus learn to write and talk. Tyler i liked the car add. Gage how much do you love brad pitt?
ReplyDeleteJesus group, your newspaper looked really well written and like you put a lot of time into it. good job.
ReplyDeleteDude Jesus do spell check next time and review what you wrote, but good job over all.
ReplyDeleteKyle it was not funny and not informational, I do not think that Time Magazine will be around in 100 years anyway. It was ok overall, but it was not great.
ReplyDeleteVery funny great job
ReplyDeleteSpencer Phil KJ Jordan, i thought not wearing a shirt was weird. good video though. you did alot of cool editting i guess
ReplyDeletespencer, phil, kj, jorden
ReplyDeleteget a shirt ...is that tyr painted on? i liked the weather
Put a shirt on man your in a class of 25 guys and two girls. Overall though hilarious I liked the weather and the led zeppelin thing nicely done.
ReplyDeleteSpencer Phil KJ and Jordan
ReplyDeleteGreat Presentation loved the Special on space drugs also loved the Hurricane scene
Spencer and group that was some funny stuff, although the whole topless thing was a little disturbing, but other than that good work.
ReplyDeleteJordan B's group-
ReplyDeleteI thought the news stories were very creative and the format was really funny. epecially mixing in the alien with humans. Over all good job guys.
kayla, anthony, jon, trevor, terrible acting but funny car crash and movie clips
ReplyDeleteI like the car accident and star wars part its hilarious.
ReplyDeleteKayli, Jon, Trevor, and Anthony
ReplyDeleteI liked the news report, it was funny and i liked the cutting for the scenes.
i thought johns group was extremely informing and full of intriguing facts about the future. there is no doubt that news will look like this in the future.
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ReplyDeleteKayli, Jon, Trevor, and Anthony
ReplyDeleteSuper random! Super Epic! I liked the Rambo hall scene and The 12 car pile up
logan, i thought that your articles were really thought out and pretty good. land squid was funny.
ReplyDeleteLogan Nice site. It flows well and the articles are believable for the future.
ReplyDeleteTrevor, John, and Anthony great job, that was some pretty funny stuff, and i want two see that movie now and i don't even know what its called.
ReplyDeleteThose are some creative ideas besides the sharks with laser beams on their heads.
ReplyDeletetyler, it was good hearing a project that wasnt just commedy. good stories
ReplyDeletelogan, Dr.chaos? is that the name his parnets gave him? what threat is the land squid?
ReplyDeletetyler, thoughs sneaky goverment brand clothing never trust it
ReplyDeleteTyler
ReplyDeleteyour presentation was very informal, I liked the difference in articles one almost state press, the other anti-state
Tyler: the articles were very creative.
ReplyDeleteLogan, that was some interesting stuff, you had some classic sci fi stuff with some good new original stuff
ReplyDeletetyler, your report not only moved me, it changed my whole perspective on life. who would have known before a news report like this, that people in the future will plug in their clothes.
ReplyDeleteTyler, that very interesting i feel like i was given good insight into the future
ReplyDeleteAnthony D's group-
ReplyDeleteThe advertisements were a cool idea that no one else thought of. But some of the content didn't really seem futuristic.
Logan-
Wow he did a lot of work for being alone. Land squid= classic! I really liked this presentation the format was very original.
Tyler-
Big brother? Two newspapers, it kind of reminds me of North Korea, where everything is censored by the government.
Cody - the formal articles were good. You took a different route of explaining the future instead of the other groups who just said it was. It was a nice change
ReplyDeleteCody and Bradley
ReplyDelete6 year old story was very funny! enjoyed your presentation good job
Hesse bro that was...um...good work, i thought the whole J Holland thing was funny
ReplyDeleteLogan
ReplyDeletegood work enjoyed your creativity great job!